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Title: Some writing.


Snowy - June 1, 2008 03:57 PM (GMT)
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People are like snowflakes. They start off, different and alone in this world.
But then they start to melt, they start to break down after being alone for so long.
Then what happens?
They continue to stay alone as drops of water.
Sitting alone on a single leaf, refusing to come near another drop of water.
Only once they decide to join together to make a bigger drop of water can they obtain the strength to drop off the leaf.
Then what happens?
They hit the ground, and break apart. These are rough times.
Only once the can get the help of other drops of water can they once again join together, with even more drops of water.
They create a puddle.
Eventually, those drops of water continue to join until they create a pond, then a lake, and eventually an ocean.
The cycle is not complete.
Then what happens?
Being conjoined to so many other drops of water, each drop of water begins to become salty and frustrated. They eventually break down into vapor and fly up into the clouds.
Then what happens?
They become snowflakes and fall back onto the Earth.


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People are like cinders in what used to be a fire.
If you bring them close to each other, they burn too hot and eventually set up a huge flame.
But, if you seperate them, they begin to cool off.
It's best not to stoke the fire, just walk away. Don't try to make up right away or try to prove your point, just walk away.

FBG - June 2, 2008 03:00 AM (GMT)
on the second one, if I may add something to it, after stoking the embers back into a huge flame, they will die off earlier than if you were to just leave them alone and let them cool down.

Very nice writing, reflective and inspirational, thought provoking. nice job.

Reflecting is a greater means of gaining, once received, the reflection will be bounced off and radiated in another direction to inspire yet more places to gain the reflection and pass it on giving a continuous circle of reflection. ;)

dtroup - June 3, 2008 11:42 PM (GMT)
Very nice Snowy!

Snowy - June 22, 2008 04:17 AM (GMT)
well then, Ty-bone. That's YOUR part then. :)

Like you said... just spread the inspiration.




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